It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Do you agree with me that it is purely important when parents guide children how to distinguish between right and wrong at early age? Personally, I approve of this opinion definitely but what sort of punishment could teach good behavior to children is crucial as well.
In my opinion, I pretty sure that children should be learned the difference right and wrong at an early because of some reasons. Parents need to teach them when they were a child since they can create a true thinking easily and educate completely. Firstly, children will have mature thinking and conduct what should they do in several situation. They know about behaviour in a friendship, work, family on a daily basis such as they will say sorry if they do wrong. For instance, I used to tell a lie parents about playing truant when I were a child, I felt nervous and guilty of this problem. Thus, I apologized for parents to this and I realized that saying sorry is not difficult. Another reason about opinion is that children would be find it easy when they come into contact with other people. Due to true awareness, they bend into situation and bring many benefits. For instance, when you come to a new atmosphere, you should learn how to reside without feeling different. Moreover, teaching children distinguish between right and wrong could reduce the rate of anti social behavior. Nowadays, there are many juvenile delinquency since they should not guided fully. Thus, they have a hot temper and think they are right in behaving
However, punishment is important problem that make people caring. In the earliest report, most of juvenile delinquency are often rooted from the way parents teach such as beating children when they do wrongly . Afterward, this punishment make children suffering pressure and hurting. Therefore, parents and teachers should use sort punishment in order to teach good behavior to children. They could give them some suggestion or advice about dealing with problems. According to statistics, there are 780 people using significant stories so as to guide children about good behavior.
In conclusion, about all reasons are mentioned above, I strongly agree with opinion because they could grow up properly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03814713896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55855198657 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4951157243 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.45 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337482218206 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105252606783 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082452941352 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218997401052 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119910166429 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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