It is a natural process for animals species to become extinct(e.g Dinosaur,dodos.....) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this happening ).Do you agree or disagree?
some people ponder that animals play a vital role in human being life.There are natural updates day by day.The root can that animals influence to become extinct on the earth.Some dozen can not like the animal .There are manifold reasons.
This essay throw some light an all aspects to the see in right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant in these days adolescent does not love the animals.Hence they are disliking all the animals.For instance, dog ,cat ,goat ,elephant ,
dolphins ,hen and horses so on.Otherwise kids would not intracting with someone.They always like alone himself.All in all teenager should not awareness in communication skills than they do not taking with somebody.However,
juvenile would not consciousness participation any activities like indoor games ,study ,function ,
personality development extra.
Nevertheless ,there are no deying it is no doubt animals has very honested and faithful in their life.Therefore some off springs trust that we must loving and care for animals as well as animals has given return back rather than loved such as obtained for us.Last but not the least today technology is very common thing in whole life.Then,all ages using the electronic gadgets.For example cell phone ,computer ,laptop,
tablets and so on.In addition toddler could not extrovert in the animals.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand a few day person should divide in their work whole life but also they can equal focus on the modules .On other hand they might like the animals as far as animals is very essential part of life In my point of view they should loving and take care for animals such as animals can feel and emotion .Thus,there are understanding all the things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20494699647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90068288836 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.965892592 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.6 106.682146367 276% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.4 7.06120827912 445% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150564482661 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807341170514 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396474372112 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482451214111 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489668122889 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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