Technological advancements have decreased the writing and mathematical skills of the students nowadays.
Should the use of calculator and computer be limted in the classrooms or not?
Nowadays,a lots of technology is very fast rather than pupils and kids most of using elctronic gudgets.The root can be saving time and plenty information about study skill related on internet such as that it is no doubt technology is advacement todays.There are manifold reason.This essay would throw some light on all aspects to see right perspective.
The seems to the issue are multiheads,There most predominant human being using plethora electronic materials.For instance,cell phones, tablets,computer and laptop so on. There are umpteen reason behind it. However,businessman, office,hospitals, schools,collegesand engineer extra.Afterthat,it is true technology is play vital role in adoloscent life but also they doing many work on internet website.
Nevertheless,there is no denying the fact that ,education is very indispensable part in their life.Therefore,they are most of effects toddlers and childrens life because study is only they can success in our life.Then,dozens do not co -education skill in their life .Otherwise ,they have been nothing achievement in whole year.Thus,it is correct todays,writting and mathemathical skills most of child does not use it.Moreover, they are always like introvert himself through they should not like indoor games.Last but not the least, in my point of view, chidren little bit using technology things .Hence,they could select good life style in future.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand teenergers life is gold period in their life and they could not never back time in their life.so,I advise kids only use phone in free time and most of time we should study it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i reckon, no doubt, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.532 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62339288513 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.915712741 49.4020404114 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.5 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6666666667 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12963411802 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600120496787 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421522313368 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801409310546 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304166915392 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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