It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the south pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the past few decades, it has become possible to travel to far isolated areas in nature like visiting the south pole for tourist and scientists. Advantages of this advancement are comparatively more as compared to the disadvantages.
To embark upon, there are various advantages of travelling to remote environment which are natural. Today it is possible to travel to new excursion. By discovering far places, people get the opportunities to gain worthy experience and come to know variety aspects like temperature, values, animals and many more while environmental scientist could access information conducting their studies. For example, they can enhance their knowledge about polar animal and their life style or ice layer melted these days which make global warming throughout the world even in the South and north poles.
On the other hand, one of the drawbacks of coming to natural environment far away our home is that the habitat of flora and fauna is in danger of human’ curiosity. Therefore, not only does travelling to untouched area impact on animals’ health and their behaviours but also travellers might face the risk if being attacked by animals like white bears. Also visiting somewhere such as the Amazon rainforest require a large amount of investment which is high. As a result, it seems that rich people and environmental researchers can afford these expeditions and ordinary people can not enjoy these areas unfortunately.
By the way if conclusion, although having a visit remote regions have disadvantages, it can be argued that the demerits are outweighed by merits of experiencing undiscovered places mentioned in this world in order to broaden our horizons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32222222222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00503692383 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1111917358 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229997050405 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081312962843 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622514541702 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135758906295 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771027053434 0.056905535591 135% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.