as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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as well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Companies make an effort to maximize their profit but it should be taken into account that they shave some society responsibilities after setting a firm. I completely agree that with the idea that properties have to make a contribution to do some activities as their duties.

On the one hand, companies try to make a profit as their priority goal because all managers want to success against competitors in the world. All companies have some cost to cover such as employees’ salary, renting a place, taxes and bills. If a company would unable to manage the cost, it might go bankrupt easily. Paying the taxes can support the expensive of social services like building hospitals, schools and roads which is one of the merit of companies for society. In addition, firms actually need some colleagues in different positions that it makes the unemployment rate loss. So, companies play a critical role in reducing the amount of poor people and can offer them a great quality of life.

On the other hand, I believe that the factories have to accept they have social responsibilities as well. Firstly, companies have an impact on the environment which are serious problem including global warming stemming factory emissions and There are some rivers and oceans are polluted by factories .factories could compensate problems caused. Secondly, there are some resources offered to businesses to improve their industrial activities. For example, they have the chance of taking out huge loans from banks in order to invest greatly. One of the way is that to giving charitable donation and big companies should spend a large amount of money to conduct research.

To conclusion, not only do all companies play a vital role in the economics of countries but also they have some social responsibilities as their part of duties. I am in opinion that owner of businesses have to be happy that help the members of their society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ers and oceans are polluted by factories .factories could compensate problems caus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81782655328 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.456671145 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173162817578 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606138525016 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567065071623 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115142566585 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397272625342 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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