In today's world, advertising has numerous impacts on people's lifestyles. Whilst, I believe this industry has some effect on people's desire, I presume that this may not the only reason that is affected by people’s choices.
On the one hand, the power of advertising is undeniable. This power will result in people's inclination and desire for buying options. When people see some products everywhere and every time they look, contributing to their choices. Due to the fact, people use the same products, they are loose individuals' personalities. In addition, when people bias to buy well-known products and purchase for them, resulting in eliminate smaller companies from the industry. As a result of the eliminating company, people have the smallest areas for choosing the goods, so they lost their different individuals and look the same.
On the other hand, advertising is not the only factor that peoples lost their different desire. For instance, junior citizen tends to obey the celebrity and public figure, causing choose the same products to reassemble their peers. Youngsters copy everything from their popular celebrity, even their hairstyle or wear perfume. In addition, another factor, that is impacted by people have the same lifestyle, is society’s attitude. For example, in Iran, most of the women use the black color for their clothes which is some kind of norm those people obey that.
In conclusion, it is my conviction that advertising has a great impact on people's taste. However, I believe that it is not the only reason people have the same lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23921568627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904320773 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6213136478 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177051840667 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710043935126 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035726665524 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115521536876 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291181951352 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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