In many countries, a huge number of students are choosing to not study science subjects. In this essay, I will discuss the factors causing this problem and the effects it has on society.
There are many reasons that less students tend to choose science subjects to study. Firstly, science subjects are usually more difficult which require students to put more effort in their study, furthermore it is a boring subject if the teaching approach is not right. Take Chemistry as an example, in order to pass this subject students are required to do several researches and complete numerous projects that prevent them from having free time. Also, in some countries such as Vietnam, experiments are not widely taught at school which make science subjects tend to be boring with only theories. As a result, science subjects seem to be less attractive to students compared to sociology or business. Secondly, graduating from science fields have fewer employment opportunities, students are less likely to choose these majors. Instead of that, they would rather choose subjects that allow them to easily find jobs in the future.
The lack of students studying science subjects can lead to several major consequences in the society. One of the main consequences is that less students will graduate and work in science areas therefore less scientists. This would lead to fewer science developments and also prevents people’s quality life from improving. Additionally, when a huge number of students choose to do sociology or business, jobs in these areas could be full and run out of vacancies. Therefore, many graduate students can be unemployed which can be a burden to society.
In conclusion, students tend to choose easier subjects at school to study due to the difficulty and boredness, furthermore these subjects can have fewer employment opportunities. Because of that, students prefer doing other subjects which can cause several major consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26602564103 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7740620694 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6256970188 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332411825392 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12694453496 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588168420586 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223746723135 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033765895679 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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