It is observed that many species of birds are on verge of extinction. What are the possible reasons for this and how this issue can be addressed?
Nowadays many classes of birds are being continuously eliminated from world. In this essay, I intent to discuss the major factors responsible for this issue followed by its viable solutions.
There are manifold points to share up my views but the most preponderant one is more development projects by humans is destroying the living space of birds which leads to their death. As more demand of natural resources forces humans to make some changes such as deforestation for building industries as well as higher consumption of fossil fuels releases more carbon dioxide consequently making environment hotter to survive. In addition to this, migratory birds find it difficult to navigate due to disturbance caused by mobile towers. To evident my point of view, a report published by IUCN states that the Hawaiian black faced honey creeper extricated in 2004 owing to changes in environment caused by humans.
This issue can be solved with government’s intervention. Authorities should frame stringent policies regarding the protection of birds. Moreover, officials should focus on sustainable development without interrupting ecosystem. Besides this, strict rules for limiting the usage of mobile networks and lowering the level of deforestation should be implemented with immediate effect. These steps will help to decline the death rate of birds. In 2015, Indian government initiated a program named as “Save Bird” through which officers impose above changes in a particular state helping them to save many birds.
From the arguments outlined above one can conclude that damage caused to surroundings by human beings is the most crucial reason in causing this issue which can be resolved by appropriate strategies attained by government.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50740740741 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91024631392 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6160297732 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255867583159 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877892236197 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088894932055 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171349357367 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732907486821 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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