It is thought by some that its is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people these days prefer to live in rural areas that away from the noise and pollution that urban cities have. On the other hand, lots of individuals enjoy to be surrounded by various essential services which is only existed in the main cities. this essay aims to discuss these contentious issue in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that main cities have plenty of advantages for many inhabitants. Firstly, people have a chance to select a range of facilities options. To illustrate, there are a plethora of various facilities such as schools, hospitals, shopping malls, and etc.., and people can choose whatever they want based on their capabilities. For instance, numerous shopping malls are infrequently making special offers for many items, so people can get the benefit of it and buy high quality items with considerably lower prices. Moreover, people can select the best schools whom offer a high quality with low price. Therefore, living in city might expand individual’s choices.
On the flip side, it’s irrefutable that rural area provides quiet environment which participates in enhancing people lives. First of all, countryside places have almost free pollution which is attributed to lower traffic jam that bigger cities have. Consequently, very lower noise comparing with the main cities. As a result of this healthy environment, people who are living in such areas have the lowest risks of suffering from various diseases that associated with the main city life. Thus, rural environment might contribute in evolving people health in dramatic way.
To sum up, although rural towns offer unique living style that have no noise such as the cities and may boost people mood, I strongly prefer to be closed the main cities due to many advantages such as the variation of choices that it provides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20065789474 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6905883981 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9149181369 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806043754034 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297953831448 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297136881204 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566929803268 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159328899583 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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