It is true to say that many industrialized nations facing a wide range of physical health problems among their citizens.
It is true to say that many industrialized nations facing a wide range of physical health problems among their citizens. This can may stem from three main factors and a number of tactics can be taken into account to alter this trend.
The first and foremost reason for declining the overall physical health could be adopting a sedentary lifestyle. As an illustration, children tend to do more computer games than physical exercise which could lead to gaining more weight and deteriorate their physical posture in the long-run. Secondly, adults, due to their busy schedule, cannot participate regularly at a gym or go jogging. In most modern nations, both parents supposed to have nine to five job which prohibits them to devote any time for physical exercise. Finally, there is a sweeping trend among the general public to consume more junk food than nutritious and healthy meals which contribute to decreasing their health.
Regarding the remedies to address this issue, maybe the best method is increasing public awareness in terms of how to improve their general health. This can be done via social media or special campaigns. In addition to this, if employees have flexible working hours they may enroll in a gym or do some physical exercise. It would be quite beneficial to give free membership of gyms to the workforce. Last but not least policy considering pupils is that exposing them to a wide range of exercises which they can select according to their talents and interests. School curriculums should have some compulsory exercise class to encourage students to do more physical activities.
To sum up, it seems adopting a sedentary lifestyle, having too much work and eating fast food are the main reasons which could be condemned for decreasing the standard of physical health. In order to obviate this problem, a coordinated action should be taken into account by individuals, authorities and health planners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...h parents supposed to have nine to five job which prohibits them to devote any time...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ly, there is a sweeping trend among the general public to consume more junk food than nutritio...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ship of gyms to the workforce. Last but not least policy considering pupils is that expos...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11075949367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71016730292 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8759069974 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305863231395 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11482719093 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.239011413477 0.0667982634062 358% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206546396926 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166699080524 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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