Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education. Do you agree and disagree? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
On the one hand, today is corporate world but ample people who cannot work in the group and these issues mostly affected of them, earlier in their life, they have never indulged themselves in team related activities and these issues majority solved by playing team sports, where a person will be able to learn the way of accommodating themselves within the group. Apart from all this, in elder ages everyone has to face people with multiple behaviour and if children had learnt the way of acting well with community then they will handle good and bad situations very easily in their life.
Team sport also leads to add immense motivation into children. For illustrate, if we go into a gym, we always prefer to do exercise the gathering and the only purpose of it is that team always push you to work hard and show more zeal towards the exercise you are doing. Last but not least, whenever a children play in a team then they search their competition within the team and this learning of competition motivates children and push them to perform with efficient efforts.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that children playing alone will never help to learning about challenge but when they playing in a team will definitely learn about team spirit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'issues'' or 'issue's'?
Suggestion: issues'; issue's
...es in team related activities and these issues majority solved by playing team sports,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76958525346 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40439085271 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0807710129 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.5 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128885358665 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674605090162 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291758262699 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932207734389 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316858461044 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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