Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that with the rising fame of digital media, language barrier is one of the biggest social, professional and practical challenges for people. I completely agree with is notion, not only because people find it hard to fit in society and mange a job they feel frustration but also because of people think they do not live in this country if they speak their foreign language. This essay will explore how these factors justify my opinion.
Firstly, the factor that compelled me to agree with this statement is people find it hard to adjust in society and they uncomfortable to manage their job. As they cannot find a proper job to fulfil their dreams. Take an example of a recent survey conducted in America, which showed that 85% of the college students do not got good job because they speak their foreign language in working hours. Hence, foreign language become a main reason to get do not get job in practical life.
Secondly, most of the people feel burden and they think they cannot share their ideas with others and they feel frustration. As they think they cannot survive in this country because this country is not good form them. For instance, Emma Watson a leading Hollywood star, once attributed in her conference she loses her film because she speaks their foreign language to communicate their team member. Hence, country language become a serious social problem.
Finally, mostly people imagine they do not live happily and freely in this country by speaking their country language. As if they go to market and other visiting place they feel uncomfortable to speak with others and due to this fair they create social problems.
To Sum up, I believe that I completely agree with this statement, not only because of people find it hard to fit in society and manage a job but also because of people think they cannot fulfil their desires by speaking foreign language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they uncomfortable to manage their job. As they cannot find a proper job to fulfil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81651376147 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37920096224 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461773700306 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1093269411 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209562392707 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974667862201 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675643259874 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141473320078 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020786544523 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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