Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that with the rising fame of digital media, people have so many opportunities nowadays. I completely agree with this notion, not only because people choice their career easily and they get information through internet but also because of every think is easily available these days. This essay will explore how these factors justify my opinion.
Firstly, the factor that compelled me to agree with this statement is peopling choice their career very easily these days. As with the fame of internet every think is easily available and mostly people get information through others person and tutors. Take an example of a recent survey conducted in America, which showed that 85% people get correct information according to their goals because they have a lot of chances. Hence, due to the vast of opportunity every person easily finds information correctly.
Secondly, most of the people prefer to get information through internet and they think with the popularity of digital media they get proper information correctly. As nowadays with the enhancement of technology electronic media got more popularity and every one think they get more proper information through internet as compare to others sources. For Instance, Morgan Freeman and leading Hollywood star once attributed in his conference he prefer to get information through internet intent of other sources. Hence, with the popularity of time every one have more chance in is modern era.
Finally, mostly people think in this modern era every think is easily available and everyone have more choices to spend their life. As with the fame of internet every one become more social person and every one nowadays have more opportunity these days.
To sum up, I completely agree with this notion not only because with the fame of internet people easily choice their career and also they get easily information to perform any work and with the enhancement of technology everything is easily available and people have more choice and compare to previous era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...d mostly people get information through others person and tutors. Take an example of a...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...ar once attributed in his conference he prefer to get information through internet int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17933130699 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51663289288 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413373860182 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2232459187 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191782084698 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876728156331 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640148621359 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144347132263 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046857150811 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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