Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Having a good conversation requires a good command of language. People who live in an unfamiliar country have to speak in a country's language that turns out into some significant public and pragmatic issues. However, I completely disagree with this view that people make severe problems where they leave.

To begin with, people need to understand a language if they wish to migrate to another region. In addition to learning a language, they require to pass the exam such as IELTS or GRE which can verify the candidate's proficiency to read, write, listen, and speak that language. Nevertheless, without knowing a single word can cause a serious matter for a person who resides in another country. If someone understands the other nation's language adequately, life will be easier for him. For example, students depart to other countries to accomplish their dream and to make money. In spite of living there for several years, they have not found any social and any other difficulties regarding the language.

Furthermore, in the present time, individuals are becoming multilingual for work and study. Moreover, some people are really into the languages owing to their curiosity to learn languages. Besides that, English is an international language, which is spoken in almost every country. If the person doesn't know the language like Hindi, Turkish, or any language, but if he knows English sufficiently, then he will not deal with any problems. Apart from that, sometimes people hire a person who works as a translator to understand foreign language as it is converted into one's language. On top of that, the survey found out that those people who are multilingual can have a better understanding of language then bilingual or monolingual.

To conclude, many people believe that having to converse in a foreign language can cause problems for immigrants; however, in my opinion, this is not a big issue because with a little effort most people can learn the foreign language and adapt to the new environment within a few weeks.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'passing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: passing
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Suggestion: candidates'; candidate's
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, then, apart from, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11976047904 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80320117383 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3260107061 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3125 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217257052738 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674912513261 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605718765057 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155439420315 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065225999693 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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