Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Learning a foreign language for immigrants has always been one of the great barricades. It is said that people visiting to live in a foreign country without knowing the language of it may face social and practical problems and I agree with this idea for some reasons.
Many people think that living abroad has several advantages ranging from learning a new language to a wide overview. They say that once people start living in a foreign country, they will have the chance to learn the foreign language and discover the new culture with more or less effort. However, I believe that this is not always the case. People who don’t know how to speak in the language of the country they came from tend to find it difficult to address their messages to the native people there, which may result in them being socially isolated. Another reason that may bring immigrants, who don’t know the language, to the social problems is being unfamiliar with the culture and customs of the country they visited. Without having enough knowledge about the cultural identity of a new place, people may face some misunderstandings when they have conversations with foreigners, thus causing foreigners even to despise them.
It is sometimes argued that it is easy for people to get accustomed to the new life abroad and they also claim that it is not a serious problem to live in a foreign country without knowing the language since people tend to accept any challenges with putting many efforts. In my opinion, I partially disagree with this idea. There are several reasons why people may have practical problems when they are struggling to learn a foreign language abroad. Many immigrants who do not know the language simply face problems in their daily lives, such as finding directions on the street, ordering food in restaurants, and asking someone for help.
In conclusion, I feel that it is impossible to live in a foreign country freely unless people do not know the language, so people should learn the language before visiting a foreign country, therefore avoiding social and practical problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96022727273 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5759887374 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.219198489 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.307692308 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286997268118 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120475391779 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063274162792 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20910083032 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040136988283 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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