Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

Essay topics:

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

We have many issues when studying or living in some countries has different language.Although some of them are not worry about the language but there are some sort of things may struggled us, and therefore I do agree with the statement.
First of all, move into foreign language spoken country, where has dissimilar culture and tradition might struggle international people whilst adapting new environment in initial time. Without preparation of knowledge of constitution in the area we are plan to reside in, we might get deep consequences. For instance, Singapore has been illegalizing chewing gum since 1992 and citizens are not likely to break it, otherwise we have to pay the fine of 5,000 dollars.
Not only that problems that we have to face, they sometimes find it hard to communicate with native speakers because of language.It is also required social and soft skills when make friends with them. If we are not comfortable with it then we are not capable of coveying our thought to others. And it may impact our life. For example, a friend of mine is lack of language skills, and he is unable to express his sentence in mind to people around in the time in New York.
In conclusion, these problems are common and there are plethora of ways to enhance our language skills as well as social skills when living in another country.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72731752269 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4100025258 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170117224318 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05876716296 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062632642172 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10778295119 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535874927351 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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