Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been a hot debate topic regarding language usage in foreign countries. Many people believe that living in a country where people have to speak a non-native language can result in serious problems both socially and practically. From my personal perspective, I just partly concur with the statement, given some rebuttals that are going to be discussed in the essay.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that having to speak a second language in a foreign country can often lead to social issues. First, the fear of using the language accurately provides people with a sense of shyness and uncertainty, which makes them feel unconfident in the public and decide not to participate in social activities. This in the long term would cause autism and the incapability to communicate with other people, separating that particular individual from the rest of the majority. Moreover, the inability to speak a foreign language also has some practical problems on people’s regular communication. If a person is incapable of speaking the local language, they will face a lot of difficulties when going to the groceries or shopping at the supermarket. In addition, with organization, people will have less probability of being promoted, given their linguistic limits which obscure them to express their initiatives and fully convey their opinions.
However, it is always the case when not being able to speak a second language can seriously exploit people’s lives since there are several ways to improve the situation. To be more specific, language skills can be acquired and sharpened over time, equipping individuals with sufficient confidence to speak to the local residents or have exchanges in terms of daily affairs. Therefore, as long as people are willing to improve their language level, assimilating and talking to other people are no longer impossible tasks.
In conclusion, despite the compelling evidence that a second language often offers hindrances to people’s social life, I believe the situation can be easily tackled with some aforementioned solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36170212766 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95287776085 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5429147084 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275763400553 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104027421542 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792205972889 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172773693002 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683922692959 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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