Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, some people believe living in a country which requires the use of a foreign language on a daily basis may have several detrimental impacts on individuals in terms of social and practical aspects. However, I partly disagree with this statement since its merits may outweigh its drawbacks in the long run.
On the one hand, people have to face numerous difficulties when starting a new life in a foreign country because of language barriers and culture shocks. A typical example is that when students choose to study abroad, some may find it hard to socialize with other mates due to the fear of being laughed at when not using a foreign word properly, which can cause a sense of isolation. More seriously, since the new citizens do not understand and follow the laws, they may unintentionally violate them and be punished strictly which may do harm to their future career.
On the other hand, as long as individuals are well-equipped with proper knowledge of the nation, they are able to mitigate the risk of getting involved in trouble. Students who have not been accustomed to the new living environment need encouraging by other peers and adults to overcome these hardships. As a result, they can facilitate their academic path as well as enhance more social skills effectively. Besides, people should make use of ample opportunities that a foreign country offers to develop a new language skill and broaden their horizons which may benefit their future.
To conclude, although it is undeniable that a number of problems may occur at the beginning of living in a country with the foreign-language speaking requirement, the advantages you can gain from a new living environment is believed to outweigh its downsides gradually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'offer'?
Suggestion: offer
...le opportunities that a foreign country offers to develop a new language skill and bro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00682593857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84977008379 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1940235486 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248001837243 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933692719768 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517573992902 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157431340843 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416685228965 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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