Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In recent years, the Internet has gained in popularity in a great many ways. Along with the multiple advantages that may derive from this professional arrangement, it is supposed that the Internet still has its deleterious impact on the working system. The aim of this essay is to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet on employers who obtain the chances to work from home thanks to the Internet.
On the positive side, the Internet can be seen as a boon for both personal and broader economic reasons. On a personal level, this global virtual network does wonders for people in several remote areas such as offering them ample opportunities to apply for their dream companies without the need of changes in accommodation and living condition. Also, the Internet is advantageous for employees to have a wider range of choices to find the most suitable people for each position in their companies. From an economic perspective, were it not for the Internet, work productivity wouldn't be improved and benefit for investigators to motivate the global economic situation to develop as rapidly as it is now.
Nevertheless, the argument given above could be considered from an opposite angle. On the negative side, there are numerous repercussions to this pattern of the working environment, resulting from woking assurance to its management. Applicants find it challenging to make sure whether the information of some companies is believable or not and whether they could receive their salary in time. Much as this virtual network gives recruiters opportunities to choose their employees, it is also meant that it may lead to the risk in their working management and recognizing the real identity background of their employees.
In conclusion, the Internet is of both beneficial and detrimental influences. However, it is hoped that attempts should be made to balance the optimum benefits against the unsettling effects of fake data. It is thus recommended that we weigh the pros and cons prior to engaging in such an activity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...not for the Internet, work productivity wouldnt be improved and benefit for investigato...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...agement. Applicants find it challenging to make sure whether the information of some co...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prior to engaging in such an activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17964071856 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97101949921 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6240032142 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108665397557 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372009704487 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232545098643 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589526626097 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288874076118 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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