Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The given statement argues about the importance of computers in our daily lives. Indeed, they have become an inseprable part of our lives in this contemporary world. Therefore, I would mostly agree with the given statement.
We use computers every day and our lives have become somewhat dependent on computers too. Computers are used everywhere for Desigining Clothes to Space Exlporation. It can be said that computers have greatly helped us, as a species, to achieve uncountable scientific endaevors. Diverting tedious and repetative tasks to computers has provided us with time and resources to focus on more advanced technologies; particularly in the field of Space Exploration and Health.
Computers have affected our lifestyle in a way no one would have imagined a century ago. With the invention of the Internet and Social Media, this large world has become 'smaller'. With the click of a button, one could virtually travel thousands of kilometers to the other side of our planet. Similarly, Computers have helped us garner information required to answer one of the most prominent questions of the human mind : "Are we Alone ?". It has helped us capture images of Black Holes, distant Galaxies, Stars and our own Solar System.
Therefore, I would day that it would not be wrong to say that computers are one of the most important inventions in modern history. The importance of Computers and other electronics is so much so that we often regard the current age as the "Computer Age". Nowadays, the advances in Artificial Intelligence has opened a completely new chapter in this Information Age, as we try to achieve 'Singularity'. That is, the point where we create an Artificial Intelligence with intelligence comparable to Humans or even surpass that of Humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 447, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'Artificial Intelligence'.
Suggestion: Artificial Intelligence
...ity. That is, the point where we create an Artificial Intelligence with intelligence comparable to Humans ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21107266436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98231808587 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.944808145 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160674759311 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604703399714 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473805425871 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10724626296 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366846466151 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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