Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To those people who desire a challenging life, they would prefer to experience a nomadic existence rather than stay in their motherland all the time. However, to live in a strange country with foreign language using, it is hard to say that it is comparatively easy task to accomplish. There are some people say that settlement of those nations in which people must use another language beside mother language to communicate will create serious problems both in social and practical situations. In my opinion, I am not totally agree but not defense as well.
Settling in another country without using mother language does have some issues due to differences about culture, language, lifestyle and many other things. Language is the biggest problem since people are not born in that country and each language has it own unique and difficult points to take it up. If people do not know how to use the new language, it will be exactly a drama. They can not express their thoughts, their feelings, give a fully explanation for what they did or grasp the main points of some joke, slang or a normal conversation in hurry situation. It indeed creates terrible issues.
On one hand, those people who plan to go abroad and start a whole new life there will know what they need to equip for adapting with the novel life in the upcoming place. Therefore, when they have an immigration intention, they will seriously take some lingo courses or they can learn by themselves through books and online websites. Besides, many countries have their policy that people who want to live in their country must prove language proficiency through qualifications or tests for avoiding those misunderstanding mentioned above.
On the other hand, even when people make a full-hearted attempts to learn that lingo, there is a few people who can completely get all the ideas like locals. Hence, there is always a minor possibility that immigrant does not react right with the words of locals and give rise to a hassle not only in social life but also in some practical issues.
To sum up, starting a new life in abroad with the use of new lingo do have many problems to face with. Leaning that language will be hard at first but it will unintentionally become easy later and problems will have no place to occur accruing from experiences gaining day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82338308458 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60195199881 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539800995025 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1920661794 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1875 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164497663529 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572832141877 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373424248402 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954959547999 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280559557071 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.