In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
For some recent decades, due to technology development and knowledge improvement, there are some significant breakthroughs in agriculture. However, there are still a lot of people have suffered hunger around the world. This essay will shed some lights on why it is happening and what is solutions for having enough food for everybody.
There are a bundle of reasons why hunger is still a big issues but three things which are mentioned right below may be the most noticeable ones. Firstly, environment difficulties such as extreme weather, clean water deficiency, polluted soil, climate changes or natural disasters are major contributions to food shortage. The most obvious example is Africa, this place usually has prolonged drought which is a hindrance for a strong growth of plants as well as animals. Secondly, political events like war, social riots, conflicts and violent attacks have somehow slowed down cultivation progress. Lastly, jobless occurs everywhere since high-tech industry have had highlights evolution lately. From the time farm or industrial machinery has appeared, a large amount of employees has been cut down to save company’s budget. With no money, they live with a craving for food, clothes and many other things.
A complete plan for solving all those causes is not an accessible action that each citizen can solitary do. These things require many people and governments around the world together accomplish it. Governments can establish or encourage charity associations to willing supply food, clothes or some necessary stuffs for underprivileged people. They can also look up professional geographers who can help in finding and puzzling troubles to overcome the extreme events in those places. Lastly, they should focus more on education to have high educated people who can aid in country development in near future.
In brief, famine is one of a hot issue in global nowadays accruing from hard situations like geography, war and jobless which are not easily overcome. Government and people in all countries should notice and give a hand in breaking this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bundles'?
Suggestion: bundles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, in brief, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38554216867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82016996211 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.064449543 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.176470588 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181094223506 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540426911398 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549086693739 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104917782176 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352365459103 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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