Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The difference of language when we have a life in a foreign country is frequently cause of struggles about society as well as practice. I totally concur that people insidiously feel uncomfortable with these problems, however nothing can not be solved.
The biggest social and practical challenges which people commonly cope with are language barriers combined with strange customs. As our relationships are almost constructed by communication, language plays an important role in empathy and integration together. With the different tongues, people arduously exchange their ideas, discuss about their hobbies, or further understand local’s jokes, then the connection between them is not linked. Moreover, the change of accommodation is synonymous with the change of food tastes and habits. All of the surrounding stores buy materials of foods which is not suitable with our perennial styles. Or also, Western people feel uncomfortable with using chopstick to eat when they live in many countries such as China, South Korea, Japan or Vietnam.
Nevertheless, these serious problems above are not impossible to overcome. Language is actually a human instinct . If we willingly improve and break down the language barrier, then sinking into an environment with all of the voices and words in that language is an excellent condition to integrate during only one or two years. Since trading is really good nowadays, merchandises from all over the world are easily imported into the other countries. Therefore, we conveniently find the foods which is our tastes. Also, living around with a community do the same thing everyday, then we are progressively familiar with that.
In conclusion, the life abroad frequently stuck with manifold issues about communication as well as life styles. However nothing is insurmountable, only we readily integrate ourselves into their community. If we can do that, we will realize that other cultures are literally amazed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47194719472 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97813295253 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5095769998 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181077465153 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542325375496 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465022230117 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116755917978 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555600915332 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.