Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose to migrate to other countries in search of better opportunities and living environments. Opting for a country where you have to use a totally new language may lead issues in social and practical scenarios, but these problems are not so difficult that they may not be solved.
Firstly, migration is a common trend for people from different backgrounds and all of us face various issues due to a language barrier. This can vary from misunderstanding talking with locals to talking with your co-workers. For example, ordering a taxi or buying groceries at a local shop can be a huge task.
Secondly, language speaks the soul of the culture and the country. Therefore, not being a native may leave you as an outcast in some situations. For example, you may not be able to get the joke that your colleagues are making and it can make you feel isolated.
Moreover, you could lose many prestigious offers due to the language barrier. It can be a hindrance for you in your career and personal growth.
However, these issues are short-term problems which can be solved with the touch of technology and friends. Nowadays, technology offers us numerous opportunities for excelling in any subject. By using different internet resources and applications, we can start learning the local language and feel more confident in our language skills. For example, by using Google translate we can break the ice with local shop owners. It can help us to build our first sentences and feel more native. Furthermore, we can do a thorough research about the country before we decide to move in. This can also help us to handle difficult situations and deal with culture shock better. Additionally, having local friends may be extremely beneficial to improve your spoken skills.
In a nutshell, I strongly believe that language barriers can cause many hardships for us while residing in a different country. However, not being permanent, these problems can be tackled with the right help and attitude.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'thorough research'.
Suggestion: thorough research
...eel more native. Furthermore, we can do a thorough research about the country before we decide to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99101796407 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80637320661 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4965675969 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.35 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22213624933 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692326310464 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496962866461 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132943251784 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578730527149 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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