Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job and shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and state your opinion.
Unfavourable conditions like financial issues and unfulfilling jobs are the common problems by which majority of the individuals are affected these days. As believed by many that we should learn to live with it, however, others are of the opinion that constant attempts should be done to improve the circumstances. Both views and opinions will be stated in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the supporting examples.
A large section of society is confronting these difficulties, nonetheless, some people just accept their standard of living. They think that it is their faith and if any efforts,will be made to come out of this situation, it will go in vain. For example, it is seen that almost 90% of the candidates seeking a place to work take the first job they get with meagre salary. They do not strive to wait for the best opportunity. I feel that these people have low morale and they are unconfident about their capabilities. They have accepted this lifestyle, perhaps it had prolonged for too long. It seems inevitable to most that their way of living can never be raised, therefore, motivational events ought to organised to boost their spirits.
On the other hand, some of the beings are quite zealous and career oriented. They cannot afford to spend their life in misery. They reckon that if they work-hard and be patient, the current status can be easily uplifted. For instance, there are many legends who lived in poverty are now surrounded with luxuries. There achievements are laudable which is entirely based on perseverance and diligence. I suggest, if you are willing to accomplish something, it certainly can be attained sooner or later. That is why inspired people tend to reach the desired pinnacle, they aim for, especially because they believe in themselves.
To summarise, self growth leads to the development of a nation as whole. It is the mindset of people and their attitude towards what they want from life. Mankind can have a secure future only then when he longs for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99408284024 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76250257348 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8416001482 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110907214105 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341084833399 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381432918688 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683431494405 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476100946002 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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