Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

It is universal truth that learning a foreign language is very common issue regarding study or doing job in overseas countries, but some people believe that there are numerous problems such as social and practical which can be occurred by learning foreign language as compared to local language. I strongly agree with this statement and we'll discuss given view points in upcoming paragraphs before reaching opined conclusion.

to begin with, nowadays a lot of individuals specially students who are visiting various nations regarding their further study or doing work, are more encrouraged in order to learn Foreign language, because language is the priority of every country and also identifies is a particular culture and tradition. For example, in order to work in overseas nation it is priority of everyone to learn that language regarding communication.
In addition, learning foreign language may have serious impacts on social and practical works because the curiosity of learning a new language can cause extinction of local language and culture. For instance, in modern era, English is the most popular language across the globe. According to a recent report which shows that several languages at the highest point of extinction and most of them have destructed in few years back due to the popularity of English language. However, an extinction of a particular language may be reason of extinction of a culture.

To conclude, I strongly suggest diet even everyone should be multilingual person but should not forget his local language and culture.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31048387097 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79031966716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9897112556 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236123288112 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907936409607 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920028060161 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123803743376 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746729498448 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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