Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
People who live abroad which force them to speak a foreign language is believed to face crucial social and practical issues in balance. In my opinion, as a non-native speaker, practical matters are more possible to occur more than social problems. This essay will explain how incorrect foreign language usage can affect both problems in society.
Practical issues which can be found by people who moved to another country with different language may appear every time they have a conversation with natives. If they deliver their thoughts in wrong words and sentences, in instance, the locals will have misperception. As the consequence, they will achieve incorrect response which ruin their goal. For example, if someone asks ‘flour’ in an English-speaking country unclearly, maybe the waiter will give her or him a flower since the pronunciation of these words are similar.
On the other hand, a matter in a social point of view also can be occurred in society due to lack of ability referring to inappropriate language usage. For example, natives will avoid communicating with foreigners because they want to avoid to the possibility of misunderstanding between them. Hence, the foreigners who cannot speak local language clearly may have fewer friends.
In conclusion, I believe that practical problems are more important to be considered by people who live in a country with different language rather than social problems because the effect can be felt directly when they have an interaction with native speakers.
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While there are many benefits
While there are many benefits to live in a country with the foreign language, there are some drawbacks to consider, regard to social issue and practical affairs. I completely agree with the above line and this essay will give explanations.
One of the most important factors, which is vital among human kinds is communication and common language removes communication barriers and increase convenience. Therefore, lack of the local language knowledge causes serious consequences deal with making friend and as a result bring loneliness. Apart from this, something might not be known as good expression in another culture and a new comer using them offends others. To clarify, a survey in 2015 showed that most of migrants suffered the social aspect, which comes from language obstacles.
Turning to the other effects of language on people who live in a foreign country. The individual will have trouble finding work if he/she is not good in local language. As a result, the unwell-paid job is supposed to them and economic issue would be increase their problems. For example, most of new migrants usually work in restaurants or as servants because they are not familiar with the culture and language. Therefore, if a person learn the local language to be fluent, he/ she can improve his/her job and rise salary.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the belief that the person may have problems such as communication problems that affect the individual's social life or does not find good work if he or she lives in abroad that differs language.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32510288066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98040704057 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588477366255 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.956840877 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305198870192 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113298915963 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742804109885 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20010253843 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643432266814 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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