Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
Migrating to different countries to pursue career or to study abroad is new trend ultimately leading to obstacles in communication due to lack of command on language.In my opinion, many problems can be encountered due lacking in proficiency of foreign languages ,producing a negative impact on daily and professional life.
It is believed by many that, language is paramount factor in communication with different people .Native speakers tend to misunderstand while interacting with foreigners, leading to aggression. Pronounced effect can be seen on daily life ,as an illustration, ordering food in restaurants,understanding directions while driving or reading sign boards in shopping malls.many people avoid making new friends because they feel diffident and hence are isolated from social activities.to illustrate my friend went to a festival of African origin ,was unable to enjoy the party because of language barrier .understanding of language enables to value various cultures ,customs and new trend in community.
Many argue that, obstacles can be transformed into opportunities by emphasizing on positive aspect,increase demand of employer who can speak language of their own country is observed for multinational companies for example a British company wanted to get a business deal in Pakistan will supremely choose native from Pakistan. Enhancement in technology can be utilized ,many apps are available which can translate in many languages facilitating tourism and emigrants.
in my opinion, as social and practical problems influence creativity and proficiency , government and individual must take steps to discourage isolation and make new policies to help emigrants
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 56
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76706827309 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45392530319 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 255.88325463 49.4020404114 518% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.2 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8 20.7667163134 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169091184817 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874458805261 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309934968365 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993628658456 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221063961742 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.82 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.77 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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