Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is argued by some that people, who live in a country where resident’s native languages are different from them, have to speak a language other than their own. It is said that certain major social and practical issues seem to stem from this. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view.
It is true that there appears to be several social issues that can be caused by this. Firstly, if people speak in their native language in public places living abroad, citizens of the country tend to feel that this action is disrespectful towards their culture, which can be seen in Russia. Furthermore, people who struggle to speak the spoken language where they live find it difficult to communicate with locals and make friends, and as a result, they might feel isolated. This has negative effects on people’s social as well as mental health, leading to depression.
In addition, there are various practical problems that people have to face when they live in a country speaking a language other than their mother tongue. It can be clearly seen when it comes to education. It is undoubtedly challenging to study in a foreign language, lowering the rate of academic achievements. People also have to obey regulations, ranging from laws to warning signs, that are probably written in the state language. If they break a law due to language barriers, misunderstanding the language cannot justify their unappropriate behaviours. After all, everyone needs to be financially stable, and thus they ought to either to be employed or to run a business. If they are not fluent in the spoken language where they want to work, it can be tough to find a job.
In conclusion, I do agree that major social and practical issues can derive from the situation when people live in a country where it is required to speak in a foreign language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, after all, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86624203822 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78797601424 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509554140127 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2369563766 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279588712452 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982680607513 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645017622848 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205207417219 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517251089123 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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