Longer life spans and improvement in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?
Nowadays older generation over sixty-five years old can do certain activities and can contribute to a great extent. I belives that they could participate in some activities not only in the formal range but also in outside the scope of their professional qualifications areas. This essay I will ouline some ways in which this interest can benefit society.
On the one hand, the older generations can contribute to society and experience life when they get older by participating in teaching and research at universities. It’s one of the ways they can have a little fun old age and contribute to society. Especially, they can receive commissions from their lessons and more importantly they can help the younger generation be insprired to learn. Moreover, students can learn from their experience industry areas and valuable lessons from real life.
On the other hand, besides the research and teaching in which society can gain from a more active older generation is by encouraging older workers to stay in work part-time. Older people may not want to be in a position to do full day’s work. Nevertheless, their experience can create a lot of value for their companies so older people can become mentor for companies and organizations. They attend new employee training courses on use machines as instructors. Sine then, the unemployment rate after graduation can decrease. Student have not experience can be accepted in any companies.
In conclusion, the old generation may bring some advantages to society. Since their life expectancy improves, the demand for the old generation’s contribution also ought to be raised. Make the lives of the elderly more busy and meaningful but also contribute to the development of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19572953737 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00600750221 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0400437871 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381123218468 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119842540937 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792567234291 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214839330893 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824515072993 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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