A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in the computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?
Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion Technology plays a vital role in our daily lives that a reason it took the attention of many individuals.
Technology took the attention of many individuals, as well it plays a vital role in our daily lives. I think that living in a digital world has more pros than cons because it allows us to communicate quickly and also provides many learning opportunities.
One of the main benefits of using the internet is that its Enhances collaboration. Before the advent of digital devices, communicating with people from other countries was mostly impossible, but now we can connect to anyone from anywhere in the world because of the Internet. For instance, if someone is out for dinner with his or her wife, the person might still get emails from work on the phone. Some even go this far and answer these messages right away. Another advantage of the computer age is that Anybody with access to the internet now has access to a huge proportion of the world's knowledge over the web. World best universities and other academic institutes delivered virtually online Lessons and courses that are available for everyone. For example, YouTube and other online course websites provide wide varieties of free learning material , through this people can build skill in the fields they are interested in.
Finally, there are some drawbacks such as human jobs are replacing by robots, but the advantages of modern technology outweigh those by far. As, in industries, robots are working in the place of humans but still there a lot of jobs that will never possible to replace by Artificial intelligent. For an instant, robots will never be able to truly replace human resource managers because managing interpersonal conflict with the help of non-cognitive and reasoning skills, which cannot be programmed into robots.
In conclusion, advanced technology has many benefits in our lives as it provides a different platform for education and make social connectivity easier and it clearly outweighs the flawed effect of the computer era.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... has access to a huge proportion of the worlds knowledge over the web. World best univ...
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Line 2, column 851, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...wide varieties of free learning material , through this people can build skill in ...
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Line 2, column 862, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ies of free learning material , through this people can build skill in the fields th...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Artificial intelligent. For an instant, robots will never be able to truly repla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11146496815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76298099812 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0284193148 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14814989546 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497488078099 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063751070142 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110844850533 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785816636791 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.