Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by some people that schooling should extend at the age of 18 while others feel 14 is sufficient. In my opinion, by increasing schooling time many students who are not able to pay higher-education fees will get the opportunity of learning.
In recent times, having a degree from a prestigious university is so demanded to get a job in an organization. Due to extremely high fees of universities parents are not able to send children for territory education. If school time has increased than the courses that these universities offer in their degree will be taught in schools but more inexpensive price. For example, in primary level classes students just know about basic mathematics and algebra because of less time but if the period of these classes has extended than these courses will be cover in more dept as in the universities. So, long schooling will allow many students to get higher education without going to any higher institutes.
Many people want to start their career early as possible due to the current job competition. if student have to spend more time in early education than this thing might affect one’s career. After 14 years of education, any smart student can start their business in which he/she is interested. However, because of less experience, they will not clever as their competitor due to this many times they made a terrible mistake. As a consequence, they start learning from their mistake and quickly become masters of their field.
In conclusion, extending school time will give a chance to many individuals to get higher education in school in a lower budget. so this act benefits many students who are not able to pay their territory education fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78615923023 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8736055972 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119890580968 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505154844021 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855012552382 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976736704794 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908583596199 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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