Nowadays , tourism is considered as one of the strategies to develop the country's economy, however, it can also bring a lot of problems if it is not managed in a correct way. Despite the many demerits that may derive from this argument, this essay would prove that the benefits are more justifiable by analyzing how efficiency and impact that the tourism industry brings.
To commence with,although there are several benefits of the tourism industry, the main favorable aspects are employment opportunities and boost the economy. Firstly, the influx of tourists contributes to boosting the nation’s economy as funds collected through travelers are later used in modifying the infrastructure of tourists’ hotspots. Thailand, for instance, is earning predominantly through the tourism sector, being one of the developed countries in the tourism industry in the world. Another obvious merit is tourism attracts investment from multi-national companies, furthermore, this helps to improve the standard of living and employment opportunities for local people. For example, Ha Long Bay,located in the northeast in Viet Nam, is a developed sea area recognized by UNESCO, this helps people’s improved income.
In spite of some benefits above,nonetheless, there are some negative aspects, such as environmental destruction and a rise in the cost of living. In fact, the countries often ravage natural lands to build holiday destinations to generate more profits in the long term. In other words, the construction of facilities and infrastructure can destroy the habitat of wildlife and marine ecosystems. Another problem is a rise in the cost of living, such as the price of goods and services ,...This affects local people’s life,especially those in disadvantaged circumstances. For instance, there are numerous environmental reports that tourism is one of major contributors to climate change because excessive deforestation causes global warming,that is gradually diminishing Earth’s Ozone layer as well as increasing the concentration of greenhouse gasses in the atmosphere which is affecting the planet’s overall climate.
In conclusion, although traveling has positive economic impacts, it also has a negative influence on the environment. Consequently,both national and global policies for sustainable travel should be mandatory implementation to practice by people and the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76056338028 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38597118208 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594366197183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5916232128 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.071428571 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18100432887 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586680146171 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707332423774 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101528159443 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510583795511 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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