These days, a great number of countries consider tourism as a principal of source of income; unluckily, this huge profit could also be a source of problem if it is not managed in a correct way. However, in most cases, tourism’s advantages prevail over its disadvantages.
Tourism industry, over the years, would fairly bring more benefits. First, given powerful development potential, tourism would surely attracts investment from multi-national companies or wealthy foreign investors. The present point draws on the report from “ investment research” in 2021, which showed that tourism is one of the three industries that attract the largest foreign investment source; as a consequence, this travel industry could take a boost in the countries’ economy. Additionally, tourism would also creates employment in services like accommodation, transport and entertainment. That means, to cater the holidaymakers, local administrators and dwellers should ameliorate the tourist service infrastructures such as hotels, restaurants, or souvenir shops; thus, a great number of individuals could take chance of finding jobs and improving their business.
Granted, some people may assume that tourism overrating might adversely affect the natural environment. In greater detail, the construction of facilities and infrastructure may destroy the habits of wildlife and marine ecosystem, and the tourists discharge garbage into the environment. Moreover, some people might say tourism could put pressure on local resource if it is not managed correctly. It seemed for them that tourism was a perfect pretext to shift the responsibility onto their unsuitable developing of resources and protecting the environment. Were tourism not existent, certainly these people could also harm the nature to serve their life in many ways.
In conclusion, tourism industry has both benefis and drawbacks, conversely, for the aforementioned reason, I believed that the benefits of tourism would outweigh its drawbacks.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... source of problem if it is not managed in a correct way. However, in most cases, tourism’s adva...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...lopment potential, tourism would surely attracts investment from multi-national companie...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...onomy. Additionally, tourism would also creates employment in services like accommodati...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure to serve their life in many ways. In conclusion, tourism industry has both...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78983050847 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19076518664 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2514476157 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267028890689 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984327442009 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696790215609 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1762531499 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842043022915 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... source of problem if it is not managed in a correct way. However, in most cases, tourism’s adva...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...lopment potential, tourism would surely attracts investment from multi-national companie...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...onomy. Additionally, tourism would also creates employment in services like accommodati...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure to serve their life in many ways. In conclusion, tourism industry has both...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78983050847 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19076518664 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2514476157 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267028890689 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984327442009 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696790215609 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1762531499 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842043022915 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.