Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s life style? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
There is no doubt that in this modern era farming is losing its importance under the influence of sophisticated commercialism. This change is leading to serious problems in many nations. While it is observed that, many farmlands are being replaced by shopping malls and city centres, this may have an influence on natural habitat and person’s life. In this essay, I will discuss two problems that arise due to this change and propose some ways to mitigate this issue.
Firstly, the continuous decrease in farmland areas are causing bad influence on our habitat. This is because, deforestation leads to soil erosion, which in turn makes the healthy land unfavourable for agricultural purposes. Furthermore, this overcrowding and commercialization of cities and states are leading to imbalance in our ecosystem. For example, in my opinion, I am still healthy with a strong immune system, because I was lucky to breathe fresh air due to many untouched forest areas and eat fresh fruits-vegetables grown in the farmlands surrounding my city. The solution for this is that, the government authorities should imply strict rules and penalties against buying or selling agricultural lands for commercial purposed. The authorities can provide lands for such activities in centre of cities, thus leaving outskirts for farming purposes.
Secondly, the lives of individual’s are getting affected by development of these modern public buildings. The reason for this is, the food crisis people are facing, which is due to decrease in farming areas. Moreover, these lands are responsible to maintain a balance in demand and supply of food and vegetables, which is declining at a fast pace. For instance, a study done by one of United Kingdom’s news channel reported that, people living in cities which are losing their agricultural grounds are facing major food shortage, thus taking help from neighbouring states. The solution is that, people should be aware for hiked prices of food items and chemical adulterations done by these commercial activities. The people should promote the idea of buying fresh from local farmer’s markets, which would help them monetarily and boost their confidence.
However, the farming and commercial centres both hold an important place in a developing society and is beneficial to every human being.
In conclusion, while commercial activities are causing environmental deterioration and food crisis for people the people and the government authorities must play a strict role in controlling this imbalance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43073047859 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09126819678 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55919395466 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7007571198 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237934091613 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762031766688 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454929970353 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120468315263 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626773154659 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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