Many believe that there should be few restrictions on the office buildings and homes that people can build in cities while others think the designs should be limited.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Architecture has been one of the most important aspects of cultures in most societies. However, nowadays, there is no consensus on the amount of regulation on building apperance. Some people think that this area should be less controlled, while the others consider restrictions to be beneficial for common aesthtetics of cities. Although, unified design of buildings is beneficial in terms of convenience and visual pleasure, I truly believe that property owners have a right to do anything with their homes or offices.
From one side, the absence of regulations in building industry entails that the number of assets would be created with awful design that would annoy or even disturb nearby habitants. Therefore, the mental health of a person can be injured just by poor apperance of buildings that he or she see every day. Moreover, offices with arbitrary plans can be inconvenient in terms of navigation and orientation. For instance, the research of the Univercity of Cambridge showed, that citizens of old european towns with unified ancent designs are happier in average, than people from modern cities with diverse architecture. Thus, regulations in this area improve mental state of human beings that live or work nearby.
But from the other side, such restrictions violate property owners rights, which are considered to be among the primary rights in all western societies. Since, a person that possess a land or a building does not interfear with others directly, they do not have a moral justification to forbid anythig because they dislike something. In other words, buildings’ owners’ rights are prioritized over inhabitants’ rights.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion, that regardless of benefits of regulations in architecture to a society, the rights of owners are superior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32517482517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95896140383 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2559123695 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291523874977 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914861471053 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637631359805 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149482213848 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836835601584 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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