Needless to say that life of masses become wreak havoc not only in developed nations but also on the third world nation which have led to catastrophic scenario caused by infinitive reasons . This essay going to outline the prime causes and suggest some solution to deter this phenomenon.
To pinpoint the paramount causation behind this is in big cities confronting lessen resources. To clarify it, due to immigration of abundant people in developed cities they pose a challenge on sources such as land , better water facility, open area, health care facilities. On the top of it, usage of more vehicles make the situation exacerbate. An optimal example, is in Delhi it is one the busy city of India with overpopulation regardless of its area and depicted as most polluted one and air quality seems negligible for existence in it . Moreover, in this fierce competition everyone follow a busy schedule and work till night which make their health at stake and many health problem raise such as obesity, stress , depression and anxiety. What is more, individuals do not have enough time to cook so they owned from the outside food joints which have also detrimental effect on their health. Thus, due to above mention reasons this problem is burgeoning day after day.
There are colossal ways and means to combat the menacing impact of above issue such as predominant onus if on government to regulate work hours of workers whether they work in private organizations or any public firm. So, that people have enough time to distress themselves and concern towards health troublesome. Furthermore, at government must provide amenities nearby big cities so people should left the crowded place and would not much impact on their commuting to work . For instance, in Mumbai which is well renowned city authorities build housing society with efficient prerequisites and cater the need of masses providing amusement parks and gym centers so they can do leisure activity too. Hence, if the above steps are taken appropriately , this problem can be counter .
In recapitulation , this cause needs attention and expedite action to provide better standard of living to masses. It is plausible not by enforcing or by enacting the law, however, it should be done by the means of educating and aware masses about living in big city also have nasty effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, third, thus, well, for instance, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04922279793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7041750697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613989637306 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6108576603 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237745187308 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065227905366 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517948333546 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132235775738 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449107824853 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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