Recently, the trend of doing part-time jobs has increased among students and many parents have welcomed this development. While studying and working simultaneously is advantageous financially, it is often stressful and negatively impacts the performance of students.
The benefit of working along with studies is that it eases burden of parents. The quality education has become expensive in most countries and parents often find it difficult to afford sending their children to good schools and colleges. Especially in countries where public education has poor standards, parents are forced to pay hefty fees in private institutes to ensure bright future for their kids. In such scenario, if students contribute towards their education by earning their tuition fee, it can alleviate financial burden of their parents massively. For instance, In US, older population can save for their retirement because it is mandatory for every college kid to work and contribute in his fee. Moreover, it teaches youngsters value of money and also gives them a sense of financial security.
However, working along with studies often results in low grades and stress among pupils. The academics have become extremely competitive and students have to work twice as hard to cope up with this fast paced world. In this situation, managing a job along with daily lectures becomes burdensome and pupils often perform abysmally in school. Some even fail frequently and decide to quit their degree, leading to an increase in under-qualified population. In UK, for instance, many people drop out of high school because they cannot manage studies while making a living.
To conclude, many parents have begun encouraging their children to work while completing their education. Although this helps parents in becoming able to manage money conveniently, it also makes students suffer academically. Therefore, if parents can afford education of their children, undoubtedly they should stop them from doing job in their free time and support them in completing their degrees timely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to send'.
Suggestion: to send
...rents often find it difficult to afford sending their children to good schools and coll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7836296 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4923235276 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304842414051 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946393307768 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112875438066 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199431158628 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127769614077 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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