In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
In the temporary world, offences seem to appear more and more in many metropolitans. While there are various reasons causing this phenomenon, some measures should be implemented to improve this situation.
The first reason is the income gap differs significantly between the social classes. When the asset of the riches increases day by day, the daily life of the opposite class becomes more miserable. Therefore, needy people need to conduct fraud, smuggling or even human and drug trafficking to earn living by taking the money of the wealthy men. The second main reason is the essential role of money in modern and developed life. Because finance is one of the most crucial priorities of each individual, they can do anything as possible to gain commercial benefits, including carrying out various behaviours that against the law. Most of the white-collar criminals are motivated by their rapacity.
In order to solve this situation, some solutions can be taken into consideration. Firstly, the government needs to improve the living condition of the poor people by providing much more welfare, contributing the food and essential objects. The budget for these activities can be gained by increasing the taxes. Secondly, the moral education at the school should be focused by not only the education system but also all society. This measure can help raise people’s awareness about the real values and realize what behaviours should be avoided. Moreover, to enforce the law effectively, all citizens should have the consciousness to comply with national policies and rules.
In conclusion, although crime is a serious problem in many developed cities, we are still able to define exactly the roots of that and find the best suitable ways to process that.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25795053004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80575606617 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7392422343 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12754792539 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330488269306 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368751792781 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679839152353 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196630592209 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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