Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It goes without saying that more and more advertisements are appearing in sports activities or athletic events. Many people opine that using sponsorship for sports to promote brands is a reasonable idea, while others oppose this opinion as they contend that it brings several downsides. I strongly agree that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
To commence with, the most benefited object here is obviously not the sports community, but the agencies that sponsor the occasion. By sponsoring some global and well-known sports competitions such as Olympics or World Cup, they will receive huge attention from the audience watching those events all over the world owing to promoting their brand name. Therefore, advertisers are likely to increase sales surprisingly. The main point is that despite the widespread influence, sometimes their promoted products may be inappropriate or improper to be shown on television. As an illustration, alcohol drinks like wine and beer, as well as abusing drugs used to be shown on the billboard of a few sporting occasions.
However, this activity may exist some upsides as well. Sports organizations extremely need a giant amount of funds in order to operate their events. It can not be denied that sponsors are the factors who contribute the most in helping the host pay for expenses, by offering advertisements money. If there were no payment from advertisers, there would appear a lack of cost and it may become impossible to run the event effectively.
In conclusion, despite the aforementioned benefits, sponsorship in sports is literally not a good help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...aying that more and more advertisements are appearing in sports activities or athletic events...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30980392157 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02099280691 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662745098039 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4699328447 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247172762309 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752142358143 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597392762401 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143547277865 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592501627575 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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