In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The rate of crime is going up in most countries. In my point of view, there are two main causes extremely related are the lack of social solving-problem skills in some relationships and the safety net is not well-guarded in some residential areas, especially in developing countries. In this essay, I will state my explanations and give some remedies to alleviate the situation.
Generally, people intentionally think that they can handle everything well to maintain
some acquaintances but what they actually take action to make solutions for a conflict tells us exactly that their social skills are not provided enough; besides some local areas in towns or villages don’t get enough of safety at night or during special events. Nowadays, there are some hardened criminals committed the crime because of not eradicating the contradictory points in a relationship with somebody. Those criminals usually come from developing and developed countries. For that, we realize there is something needed to be done on educating people about behaviors following by standards of society. However, it is also the lack of protection from policemen in some locations that causes the crime to increase remarkably. In fact, remote areas always face with robberies due to the fact that a small number of policemen works there. Additionally, the difficulty in many aspects of development is also a good defense for some policemen not choosing to serve there. This issue is usually happened in developing nations. The reason for this is the government can’t invest too much money in provision for essential requirements of people’s police academy.
There is something worth doing to decrease the crime rate in a majority of countries. First, every person needs to learn necessary soft skills to behave well resulting in not getting into a fight with someone later. As humans have such infinite flames of anger when they are furious, they act rudely and not pay attention to their words. That explains for the importance of mastering some simple skills in preventing you to become another criminal. The second solution that is highly recommended is the interference of the government. They have such influential impact on people living in the same country. It is widespread when they start to speak about this serious problem because people will definitely be alert.
In conclusion, the increase of crime is considered to be the most attracting problem for most of people as well as the government. For people are not knowledgeable enough to cope with trouble and some places are not under good protection of local police stations, it ends up with severe crimes. However, as long as we try to make effort to learn more about skills needed in a relationship and getting the government involved, I believe the situation will gradually change for the better sooner or later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 803, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ace with robberies due to the fact that a small number of policemen works there. Additionally, th...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...d to be the most attracting problem for most of people as well as the government. For people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15236051502 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86293842077 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525751072961 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2900078417 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.136363636 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157165161311 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451670988312 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372812047884 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828030169508 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036039450948 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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