IN MANY COUNTRIES ART GALLERIES VISITORS HAVE BEEN DECLINING STEADLY. WHAT ARE THE POSSIBLE REASON? HOW TO CHANGE THIS TREND?
Art galleries played a vital role during the previous centuries for population in learning creativity. Nowadays , Across the world many art galleries are experiencing an gradual drop of tourists. In my opinion, the trend of visiting these illustrations has become old fashion for people especially who are youngsters.
To begin with reasons, individuals can easily have an access to arts of artists through internet and television by staying at home. Many internal images of galleries are largely available either on internet or documentaries are shown on television by explaining complete history of each art . Moreover , some citizens do not appreciate anymore this kind of creativity because they prefer going to visit museums and some historical places such Rome , London and Paris as compared to past generations. Now, Art galleries are considered a waste of time because these are not useful for common people in their daily life.
On the other hand, this trend could be changed easily by implementing some strategies , for instance, government should encourage individuals for visiting art galleries by reducing a ticket price and schools should often take their students there as way of teaching. More activities related to arts as analyzing of this creativity could improve the overall performance of students in other subjects as well. Furthermore, the live competition among the art artists for drawing arts should be held in galleries , in that way , more citizens would go there for enjoying their talents.
In conclusion ,visiting art galleries is not a priority of individuals as other kind of places are preferred by them. However, collective actions could be taken to rise the visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35074626866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91300645581 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8127588751 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188902314687 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716359207402 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360335822016 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112534550083 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297822997868 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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