it is important for children to act independently and make decisions by themselves
do u agree or not?
Individuals think twice before taking any decisions in their life. Some believe that kids should be able to take any kind of decision without being assisted by their parents. I partially agree with the statement since it helps them to develop their mind fastly but sometimes they could not decide difference between right and wrong.
On the one hand, it might be fruitful for kids to be self dependent in making decisions , for instance, they would learn leadership and are likely to have higher self-confidence than their colleagues who do not have enough freedom regarding their life. Children would develop their communication skills fastly which could help them for making strong relationship even with people who are older than them. These skills can rapidly enhance their chances to reach their goals in life for career advancement. As children will grow up, parents would not bother about their future.
On the other hand, kids are still not ready for deciding about themselves. Their younger age could lead them for making wrong decisions considering that they have innocent behavior. Someone can easily manipulate kids mind by taking advantages , for example, sellers could sell objects to children by letting them pay higher price than it used to be. For that reason, they always need to be guided by their parents in every moment , consequently, kids would benefit in the future from parents teachings.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that for complete development of children character, they need to be self-dependent . However, kids are unable to take right decisions due to their honest nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20384615385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59562027368 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7040373963 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176619819998 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737834700687 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034623687238 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120826160387 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298328874696 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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