It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
It is thought by some individuals that who have talent are likely to reach heights in their life as either becoming sport player and singer while others could not be able. On the contrary, some citizens even believe that kids by working hard can easily fulfill their impossible dreams. In my opinion, talent is necessary as basic need to achieve their goals.
On the one hand, many people have god gift , for instance, Messi is football player, he is currently playing for Barcelona and considered one of the best player in the world in his field. In fact, many sports critics think that he has natural talent with it, he can play fastly than others and allowed him to win many trophies. Moreover, voice could not be improved by doctors, it is a natural character of human being. Having a pleasure voice allows people to have career as a singer and bad voices are not taken into consideration by producers.
On the other hand, children need to be confidence for accomplishing their dreams. Kids are often encouraged to practice some kind of sports or even to choose career in musical industry. By spending time on learning music, for example, singing or playing piano. These capacities, kids could be able to gain by starting from childhood considering that children develop skills faster than others. It might be essential for them to never give up and should have confidence in themselves as a result it would increase their chances to have particular skills.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that without talent some heights are tough to be reached since these competitions are largely won only by people with god gift.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
... the one hand, many people have god gift , for instance, Messi is football player,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87813620072 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53050521293 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3792335474 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195243187064 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682139757392 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386014882337 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116384101868 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186636261781 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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