Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some ours actions can put into dangerous environment of earth is known by everyone but most of countries are closing eyes toward this. However , some countries has started to resolve the problem of garbage.
From my point of view , the rise of population and absence of restricted laws aren’t helping this issue. In fact , due to that reason some countries like China from where come most of plastic objects that after using they are thrown into sea where the small particle of plastic are eaten by fishs without knowing which is dangerous for them. Only few few percentage of plastic are recycled and most of finish s into the sea. Undevelopment countries don’t have any facilities to collect the rubbish from normal people that consequently is thrown where is more comfortable for them.
Governments can do a lot of things that people can’t do it. First of all, children should be educated in schools from their childhood so they can be conosciouness about this issue. In this way , when they will buy something made by plastic , the will think about this before buying needless stuff. In addition , governments have to give subsidies to private companies whose recycle material to be used another time. Alternatively, in public space should be put the machine that give some penny after putting into some objects-
Taking everything in consideration, I think we have to protect our earth because producing rubbish that isn’t necessary to live which is killing our envirornment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, so, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74961918158 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3613250741 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176647147075 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632199499031 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515266394802 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923750288585 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372689333727 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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