Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some ours actions can put into dangerous environment of earth is known by everyone but most of countries are closing eyes toward this. However, some countries has started to resolve the problem of garbage.
From my point of view, the rise of population and absence of restricted laws aren’t helping this issue. In fact, due to that reason some countries like China from where come most of plastic objects that after using they are thrown into sea where the small particle of plastic are eaten by fishs without knowing which is dangerous for them. Only few few percentage of plastic are recycled and most of finishs into the sea. Undevelopment countries don’t have any facilities to collect the rubbish from normal people that consequently is thrown where is more comfortable for them.
Governments can do a lot of things that people can’t do it. First of all, children should be educated in schools from their childhood so they can be conosciouness about this issue. In this way, when they will buy something made by plastic , the will think about this before buying needless stuff. In addition, governments have to give subsidies to private companies whose recycle material to be used another time. Alternatively, in public space should be put the machine that give some penny after putting into some objects.
Taking everything in consideration, I think we have to protect our earth because producing rubbish that isn’t necessary to live which is killing our envirornment. There is a more rubbish than past need a solution for it.
Comments
In the current modern world,
In the current modern world, the trend of generating waste is increasing enormously. Human-beings are the cause for all these detrimental changes around the world. Even though, the government is taking an ample of actions to protect the environment, it’s not sufficient for the huge amount of garbage created till date. About the effect of hazardous rubbish and what kind of steps can be taken to minimize the same will be discussed below.
There are various kind of wastes like electronic, chemical, household, hazardous waste etc. Inevitable increase in population, globalization, industrialization are some of the important reason for this alarming situation. All trashes are not dangerous, the one produced by nature becomes manure and provides the great use especially, for the agriculture. But the critical position starts due to the production of junk from the chemicals. To illustrate, plastic is made up of innumerable artificial chemicals. Nowadays usage of plastic items has become the modern trend among plethora of people and its creating perilous condition for the environment. Apart from human’s other creatures like animals, birds are also mostly affected because of plastic bags. Some animals even died by eating it unknowingly.
Although, the government is taking more efforts to solve this problem until people are aware of this risky situation, it’s more tough to create the solution. Many social organizations are organizing camp to create the alert about this situation. If government can make some polices and join with these type of NGO, at least it will create a big waste revolution to the entire world, which can be starting point to reduce the trashes. Also, should stop giving authorization for more number of industries particularly, building near river and agriculture lands.
To sum up, as the population increases definitely, waste will rise, in order to decrease it government should consider creating appropriate laws and giving awareness to the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, so, i think, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70370438969 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1324458905 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197325916408 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680937101986 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559541131576 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108818988012 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518561430296 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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