In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this problem on individuals and society? suggest solutions to this problem.
It is convienced that the cost of living in several countries are higher rather than before. In this essay, I would examine the impact of its problem and how we could solve this matter.
In the one hand, there are some effects from its problem. Firstly, the number of malnutrition is increasing among the poor people. It is because they could not buy the meals which have higher prices beside they do not have the alternative foods. For instance, the price of oil and rice are more expensive and the inhabitants in the middle and lower society could not purchase it for a long time that causes starving from day to day. Secondly, many citizen are losing their hobbies which is the one of activity that could make them more productive. It is caused by the salary is used for purchasing their main daily needed such as foods or clothes. As proof, in the big city with the dominant population is office workers have to sell their pets such as cats or dogs because the cost for caring them was so high while they need to eat healthy meals in every single day. However, this matter brings some difficultness for a few part of society.
Nevertheless, to tackle this problem, first of all, the governments have to make a line for increasing the price of stuffs so the citizens do not have hard situations for a long time. For the model, the price of rice had a maximum number that people involving the lowest society could reach it. Thus, its atmosphere did not bring a difficult situation to them for whole the time. In addition, the inhabitants must have an alternative meals containing same nutritions from the product having high prices. To illustrate, the production of cassava must be increasing for removing the rice for a while so the people could fullfil the needed of carbohydrates to prevent several diseases from it.
To sum up where my track, I believed that some problems have the solution that every single person could gain with their mind than we have to stuck in the hard circumstances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'few parts'.
Suggestion: few parts
... matter brings some difficultness for a few part of society. Nevertheless, to tackle th...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...he inhabitants must have an alternative meals containing same nutritions from the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50084252776 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.313712792 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145037170026 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544527212543 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650185039893 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121375543677 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899848378274 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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