In many countries the costs of living are rising What are the effects on individuals and society Suggest solutions to this problem

Essay topics:

In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and
society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

In the contemporary world, many people around the world are struggling to deal with rising living costs. The following essay will outline some of the effects of this issue, and some possible solutions.

Higher living costs are affecting both individuals and society in a number of ways. On an individual level, many people, particularly those living in big cities these days, cannot keep up with the rising costs of living and therefore have to have more than one job in order to make ends meet. As a result, these people barely have any time left for leisure activities and could even be more prone to negative medical conditions like depression or anxiety disorder. On a societal level, rising living costs can cause people with financial problems to turn to crime in order to make more money. For example, in some Asian countries where the monthly salary of a police officer is very low, many of them turn to corruption to make enough money.
Although rising living costs pose serious problems in many places, there are a number of solutions that could be implemented to help tackle this issue. Firstly, individuals need to learn how to budget their income more effectively and be careful not to waste money. By adhering to a strict budget, people will be able to pay their bills and save money to cover other expenses. On the other hand, governments should enact laws to ensure that citizens receive minimum wages that are enough to cover rising living expenses. Lastly, governments can create more jobs, particularly in big cities where living costs are much higher.
In conclusion, although many people around the world are finding it difficult to cope with rising living costs, there are a number of solutions that may help to mitigate the problem.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90939597315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42670355422 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7617030954 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344189976669 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120596684042 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083987539344 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201919686103 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298615781583 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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