In many countries no longer feel the need to get married, some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

Essay topics: In many countries no longer feel the need to get married, some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, it seems to be a trend that is becoming more and more unmarried female human. While some people argue that independent finance is considered the main reason guiding the decision of being unmarried women, I completely disagree with this view
In my opinion, there are several reason why some women live without a spouse or partner. Firstly, they used to be a patient’s vulnerability – their own or their parents failed relationships. Hence, they are constantly afraid of negative reiterations and lack of belief on someone. Secondly, many female human have determined to remain single because of satisfied and happy with their unmarried status. They have a sense of independence include freedom, and control over one’s one life and finances. Example many women in Vietnam choose to become single mom rather than getting marriage.
Whereas, I support perspectives that female human are able to earn money by their ability, it would be wrong, and almost impossible, to assert that financial security is one of the biggest reason lead to decide getting marriage or not. In fact, due to gender equality, normally women still seek a job and earn money since they have a husband or partner, even many female human have expected to become breadwinner in family. For example, some women in developed countries as America they are billionaire and independent finances however obviously they still got marriage.
In conclusion, it is absurd to argue that the tendency of unmarried female human is considered as a consequence of independent finance. I also believe that there are other reasons in order to guide women choosing a life without a spouse or partner, which is not an ability of earning money.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78410209759 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1312063416 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154351292908 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537108913482 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426794651502 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900606263349 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034900433006 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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