Newspapers and books are outdated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from own your knowledge or expensive
People have different views regarding hardcopy version. While some readers assert that it is old fashion and should be eradicated by its unnecessary, I support the idea that those versions still have certain values and attract people by some conveniences.
There are several reasons why some people have argued that print media have no longer fascinating. Firstly, the advent of online newspapers and books ,are more convenient to access, which means readers can find our handily articles or books to read anywhere as long as there is access to the internet, simultaneously, online versions is quite inexpensive to follow. Whereas, print out versions are fairly pricey, moreover readers have to devote time to travel to book or newspaper store to purchase it. Lastly, those online books or newspapers always up-date the latest news, hence it creates excited and joyful for readers.
Nevertheless, I believe that hardcopy version still attract certain people by some separate conveniences which online version impossibly replace. Firstly, numerous informations are unavailable in online networks, due to its copyright, many publishers have solely launched special informations on print newspapers or books. For example, hardcopy version have more health benefit than reading online ones. Because using online devices such as computer, smartphone which produce some radiations, effect harmful on the eyesight.
In conclusion, it is a fact that more and more people are reading online newspapers and books these days, because of some benefits. I still argue that print out version has own advantages, hence choosing any type depends on each hobby and passion as long as they should not stop reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
...he advent of online newspapers and books ,are more convenient to access, which mea...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44696969697 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69551160789 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5020768029 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125319595742 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533061360486 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262227596291 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839358218607 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232430070175 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.